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The moon

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Oh yellow orb so high in the sky
How you taunt me so
You in all your splender
Staring down at me
You mock me ad taunt me
You remind me every night
"I am mystery"
Oh how I long to know you
How I dream of learning of you
Your beautiful glow smiles down upon me,
My light and comfort in the dark
Why do you stay so far?
Your gentle glow reassures me,
My constand reminder that I am not alone
Because of you,
I am never alone
Oh yellow orb,
How little I know of you
And yet you know much of me
Oh how you taunt me.
Yeah, I don't really know what to say about this poem. I can't say that I like it, but I can't say that I hate it...
It was another space taker for the CW project.
This is the one poem out of all of mien that my friend liked (and if there were one or two others, I don't remember... ^^; )
oh yeah, image thanks to: [link]
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ShadowAnge1's avatar
aww, *grabs ed* hug me!!! this is a preety pic of the moon! *ed just sits there* and you did an awsome job on your poem!!! *ed still sitting there* hee hee